Awesome job :D
This was a great animation :) obviously there are things that you can approve on, but those things will come with time ^^ I think you did a really good job with this and continue to do more regardless of what certain people say :P
Now spazkid is only good because he has good people behind him ( Oney, Shadling ) they are both respectable artists. But so what if he isn't, you don't have to listen to him one bit :P
Now back to the flash, I loved it :D I thought the voice was great for it xD I couldn't help but laugh ( shows how twisted I am ) at the sad story, but it was absolutely hilarious and I will think about it every time I use cut. Continue to make more :D And if you ever need a voice just give me a msg and ill see what I can do ^^ Good luck with your next flash
Hey thanks! Your review seems to stand out.
I can't help but think perhaps Spazkid has some point
to to what he says.
There's always room for improvement.
Thanks for the positive review! It really inspired me. :)
The only reason I decided to watch this is because Oney was a voice and Shad was the artist, two of my faves on newgrounds...
But honestly this was a pretty bad flash =\ The animation was good, the voice acting was awesome ( Duh its Oney ) But the whole super aggressive nerd thing was completely not funny. I didn't even crack a smile even though this is in the Comedy category. And what isn't funny about grown men obsessing over my little pony merch? Actually not a lot, this could have been absolutely hilarious, you didn't even have to do much more than show them talk about the ponies. It makes me wonder why you bothered to add a beginning, i mean yeah okay the whole reason we see the characters is because the little girl goes into the isle to try and find the toys ( which in the back ground all we see are what exactly?)
Anyways im giving this a 2. Because of good animation and voice acting. Work on the story next time and work on the comedic side before getting together a bunch of talented people, and try to work on the script.
your opening made you loose all merit for your review.
well i think its good
So what if Alvin did it. You can say that about everything. The first step someone else has done that a thousand times over by now. Hey look at this i made a flash NOPE you stole it because someone else did it -_-/ But honestly it looks fine. If people flag it just because someone like Alvin made a smbz take a look at his animations!! Watch them closely and figure out where the Z came from people. HIS animations are just DRAGON BALL Z WITH NEW CHARACTERS SO DONT GO FLAMING PEOPLE JUST BECAUSE HE HAS TAKEN AN IDEA THAT IS USED DAILY DAMMIT.
Very Nice Collab Guys xD
I loved the whole thing, it was fun to watch and I hope this gets front paged ( or front paged again) so that Alvin Crazy fans much like munchy the panda, know that Alvin didnt just create the mario and sonic thing, its been around forever ^^. My fav part was the ending, it was creative and funny xD. MAKE MORE COLLABS
There is only a few things i could say about this flash that i found annoying, like for one thing, Color it o.O please. It would look so much better with colors. And also where did the cat come from in the shop? does he live there, hang out there or did he just kinda poof into it? But it has a good story, all it needs is color and better voice acting xD. good luck on the next one :)
what can i say, really it was better then what i could have done, especially in 3 days. but i have got to say. This Was Asshole. Honestly i really really hope your proud of yourself man. you remade someone elses video and Looped the crap out of it. ya we get it , lots of endings ... but a bit OVER KILL. -x- and honestly im no fan of Darkar, but if i made something then someone just said HEY I can do better and remake it and put in on THE SAME SITE then i would probably be a bit upset. over all it was a good flash, but seriously im putting you down because it was absolute asshole.
I think it would be worse if I just put it on another site 'cause then people would think I came up with the general idea, which I certainly did not, and I have no intentions of taking credit for that.
Awesome job 8D
Hilarious as hell xD i loved the anime reference xD i cant wait to see how this plays out :D
i gave it an 8 because it HAS POTENTIAL, i wish i could be a flash animator and a voice actor ( but sadly am only a artist :..( ) but anyways, this is a very good start, it was a little long, BUT YOU thought of a actual storyline, not just random shit happening ( you know i love you eddworld ^^ ) all you need is practice, and a better mic, it was obvious to tell which ones were experienced and which ones were not. but dont get your hopes down because of the people below me who cant appreciate things. YOUR GOOD, your a hell of a lot better then i am and im adding this flash to my fav`s so i can look back to this when YOU GET BETTER and say, holy crap i remember when he used to be like that O.O
good, but of course there can be improvements ^^
i liked it, i really did, but there is ONE thing that does bother me a bit, its the fact that YOU are a good voice actor YET you dont have any other voice actors, or even voice acted the other characters. it would make it sound more original then just using lines from games and movies/ tv shows. also it lets you be more free with the script instead of being restricted to phrases.
i like it
i like your choice of games ( especially kingdom hearts (( theres a new one and i highly reccomend it XD )) and GH which is my third fav game ) and your choice of music is good.
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